Tuesday, April 8, 2014
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Jawaharlal Nehru said, "Life is like a game of cards. The hand you are dealt is determinism; the way you play it is freewill." This means that some things in life you can't change and what you do with is your freewill. This quote is correct because your choices will determine your future whether your doing good or bad. This can be clearly seen in Freewill. This is shown because Will is in a wood class when his supposed to be in a pilot class, Will makes wooden tributes for the teens that die, and then he starts to realize that he maybe the one responsible for the deaths.
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Ezau you did a really good job in your piece of writing. There was some things that needed changing in them, like dont forget the author of you book. Also, be careful on some of the sentances and see how they go along with eachother, but other than that great job and keep it going man. Daniel Delafuente
ReplyDeleteYou have a very nice and clear sentences. Also your grammar is somewhat out of place for example i your fourth sentence you put too many your and one of them needs to be you're. I would like to know who is the author of "Freewill" though. I also notice that you are missing at least one more point.
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